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Geisha

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Possibly, the most detailed as I can go on paper before it gets messy....I decided to leave her in pencil, seeing as I was happy with how her hair looked, Saying that, she does resemble Rukia with her fringe (kinda)....maybe its her?

I currently don't have a scanner on hand, but I used my camera to take it and then altered the contrast and the brightness on Photoshop, so the colours may differ from the original....

Well, then constructive comments and critiques are welcome :D
Image size
810x1080px 314.21 KB
Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
u850SW,S850SW
Shutter Speed
1/20 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
9 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jan 31, 2012, 5:16:45 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

The hair and yukata design is really good and the fan also perked my interest. There is a considerable amount of effort spent on shading and intensifying the shading and lines.
The facial expression is also there as well. Although the dynamic of the clothing needs work since all the life is based upon the person and the clothing seems to have no life in it ( there's almost nil in waviness ) and the 3D perks needs a bit of work especially with the undershadows thats usually meant to be under the clothing layers. Other then that, All-In-All its a good sketch.

Keep up the good work, i hope this critique helps ^ 3^.